Wednesday, April 25, 2018

Better to Be Fake and Happy Chapter Five Extended Author's Note


Review Response:

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Chapter Commentary:

My biggest concern with this chapter is that there are too many people for the brothers to believably take down themselves. If it seems unrealistic, I’m sorry. At least it’s not as bad as the second chapter, through, so that’s a plus. Also, don’t hate me for that ending.

Mew-isms:


“A game of chance that could only come from mother Russia”: Russian Roulette. 

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